Ha gaar vaara ana tujhi aathvan
hota asa ka tula pan?
Badaltat aapulkiche sare mhan
hota asa ka tula pan?
Tasankit jhale pratyek kshan
hota asa ka tula pan?
Diwali Dasra tuch sagle san
hota asa ka tula pan?
Bhovti tujhya vicharanche Bhraman
hota asa ka tula pan?
Shunyat pan tujhach varnan
hota asa ka tula pan?
Vagtos vedyagat mhantat sare jan
hota asa ka tula pan?
Gaar vara ana tujhi athvan
hota asa ka tula pan?
beautiful. . .
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